"Towards A New Beginning of the Alpha bet" (hay(na)ku experiment)
Lorna Dee Cervantes
(1st poem after the book!) (1 of 26?)
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Towards A: New Beginning of the Alpha bet
***** (for A)
A
begins cautiously
dragging exhaust, feeling
gone,
hearing in
jonquil's knitted lap
music,
names, orange
poppies quieting real
statues,
tenuous unformed
vowels, wasted, X-ed,
zooed.
A burrows,
courageous, determined, energized,
fearing
G=D heard
in July's knowing
maple —
noticed, opulent
possibility quizzing returns;
sleeping
troubled until
Venus winds, "X"-s
Zeus.
A believes
cartons diminish everything,
flatten
gorges, heighten
interiors just knowing,
liking.
Memory: nimble
oscillating puppet, quicker
reality
sulking thinly,
unlit vase, wicked
xerox
zenith. A
(love
is missing)
8/15/05
(1st poem after the book!) (1 of 26?)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Towards A: New Beginning of the Alpha bet
***** (for A)
A
begins cautiously
dragging exhaust, feeling
gone,
hearing in
jonquil's knitted lap
music,
names, orange
poppies quieting real
statues,
tenuous unformed
vowels, wasted, X-ed,
zooed.
A burrows,
courageous, determined, energized,
fearing
G=D heard
in July's knowing
maple —
noticed, opulent
possibility quizzing returns;
sleeping
troubled until
Venus winds, "X"-s
Zeus.
A believes
cartons diminish everything,
flatten
gorges, heighten
interiors just knowing,
liking.
Memory: nimble
oscillating puppet, quicker
reality
sulking thinly,
unlit vase, wicked
xerox
zenith. A
(love
is missing)
8/15/05
1 Comments:
Wow. The hay(na)ku form does wonders for an abecedarian (I didn't pick up the abc until the "vowels, wasted")...just effing great work, LDC. I like how the form especially mirrors the content in the first stanza and gap. I'll come back to read this again.
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